Feedback #1
https://hannahformosaedes104.weebly.com
Dear Hannah,
Thank you for providing your well thought through reflections.
The way you have framed your blog with a relevant image as the header above your title assists the reader to immediately understand what your overall focus is.
Your use of the GIBBS reflective cycle supports the reader to hear your voice clearly.
I appreciate your personal connection in education during the Convid-19 Pandemic.
I noticed a lack of spacing between your second and third references. Please add a line to separate sources. I can also see room for improvement using images to compliment your thoughts.
The visual aspect may help the reader to focus more easily rather than maintain focus on multiple written paragraphs. These images could be relevant photos or cartoons, or, consider data or statistics in graphs from your writing.
Thank you again for sharing your findings.
Emily
Feedback #2
https://stephanieclarkeedes104acu.weebly.com
Dear Stephanie,
Thank you for providing your reflections.
I like that your blog site is easy to navigate and I appreciate the basic colour scheme you have used so the reader can focus on the material you are sharing.
Your use of the GIBBS Reflective Cycle is evident in your well phrased sentences. I understood your views well considering your clear descriptive language.
After reading your blog, I do not think it is necessary for your paragraphs to contain the titles. Removing the titles, your blog will appear to read in a more reflective style and bring out a flow on effect for the reader.
Your use of references and citations show you have done extensive investigations providing excellent weight behind your research. Try adding in some specific statistics or data from your findings to present a visual representation of your findings.
Overall, I really enjoyed your blog.
Emily